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[Kill Pico]

Not Original

The reasons I gave this a 3/10 are as follows:

Originality: 0/5
There are so many 'Kill _____' games on NG, this didn't even make me smile.
In a remake of this, add some interactivity, not just buttons and animations.

Art complexity: 2/5
I can make all of this artwork by using GIMP for about 10 minutes. Including the animation. Actually give it some style next time, like hand-drawing the Death Star or something.

Needs Improvement badly.
-demango

VioletVulpine responds:

Thanks

[3D Target Shooting - V2]

You need a reverse button

^^

Otherwise, EPIC EPIC!!!

ImpactGames responds:

Hmmmmmm... I've never heard of a webcam feed being a mirror by default, but I will look into it.

[Orange bounce]

Actually very good!

The only reason you're getting a 6/10 is that the background really conflicts with the game.
(Oh yeah and I only saw 1 bug.)

Nukemyfanta responds:

really? only one? ok, because theres plenty ;P

[Manga Dress-Up]

Nice Job!

It's a great job for a second attempt at Flash. If you make another dress-up game, here are some tips:
-Good song, but when it ends, it should loop.
-At first I couldn't see the model. Try to put in different skin colors as well.
Other than that, great job!

konnichihagabu responds:

thankyou for your feedback!
i thought the music should loop too, but seeing as i'm such a newbie to this whole flash thing i couldn't understand how to do it even with help, but i will try it next time! :)
i also found that the model was hard to see, i looove the look of pale skin, but i realised it might cause conflict with people who play it because of racism issues etc, but again, making buttons to change things cause me great confusion, i have no idea how they work or how to do them! :/
i'll do better next time, promise! :D
am very appreciative of your nice feedback and tips, thankyou!

[Poke The Cow]

Well...

It's a good start, and I'm fine with it being a 'random gadget that does nothing', but...
IT NEEDS A LOGO!
I could make one if you wanted to ever improve on this. PM me if you want.
(also, try to make the stuffed cow say more than "MOOOOO".)

gear-guy responds:

I may PM you at some point, i'm working on an improved version at the moment, with scores, and you can unlock new farm animals to annoy.

[Shipwreck Survivor]

um...

SPELL CHECK
otherwise a decent game

Lare responds:

Next time I'll make it in finnish.

[Killer Toilet Paper Pong]

LOL

LOL. Just LOL.

PsyclonMine responds:

IT'S GOOD TO KNOW THAT SOME PEOPLE ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND. <3