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I've got to agree with pretty much everyone who's commented. It sounds a bit slapped-together, and the melody isn't as obvious as it probably should be. (If, that is, the melody isn't just chords...?)

I'd also say that it would probably work better if there were less silence.

This is still awesome, though! Way better than I can do. ^-^

ChandlerThompson responds:

Thanks for the review bro, you made an excellent point on the melody, definitely should bring that out more in my future songs. I appreciate the tips, dude!

Needs more

Pretty good, but it needs more melody, like putting in another lead that harmonizes with the first. Otherwise, quite good. And I agree with the person below me.

foxnox6 responds:

thanx for the advice :)

:D :D

It's really good, but it either needs an ending or less silence at the end.

I recommend making the bass quieter, and adding piano.

Ethmiester responds:

I agree entirely that it needs less silence at the end. The fact that it has all of that silence was just a screw up on my part.
Thanks for the ideas.

One thing:

The theme needs to reveal itself sooner

Orandze responds:

Thanks for the quick feedback and high rating. I will play around with it some more and see what I can do. I know that sometimes I try too hard to be subtle.

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EPIC!!!!
*Dances*

Adjeye responds:

Thank you!

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